Thank you Aliah for introducing me to your writing challenge! She's an amazing blogger, I assure you won't regret clicking on this link ! Cranberries and Crescents:)
The aim of this challenge is to encourage people to continue writing, even though school is making each and every one of us busy.
I know I'm not a very good writer, I'll take this wonderful opportunity to improve my writing skills. Thanks again Aliah!:)
Why don't join me in the Cranberries and Crescents Writing Challenge too?
The aim of this challenge is to encourage people to continue writing, even though school is making each and every one of us busy.
I know I'm not a very good writer, I'll take this wonderful opportunity to improve my writing skills. Thanks again Aliah!:)
Why don't join me in the Cranberries and Crescents Writing Challenge too?
This was the challenge for this week:
These are your 3 challenges for this week's chapter!
Use one of two pictures given to start story.
One character must have a kind of power (it can be magical or
non-magical).
Something important was lost.
Chapter 1
It was over. Everything was over.
I lost him... and I was just about to lose myself.
Everything around felt unreal, like I was living a dream. I
ran my fingers slowly along the rough surface of the tree branch sticking out
in front of me, bright red gashes appeared below my fingertips. No matter how much my heart desired, I was
not living in a dream world , I felt the sting from the cut , it hurt.
I've been here many times, this beautiful place has always
encouraged me to feel calm...but for the
first time, I couldn't feel the gentle caress of the breeze brushing my face, neither could I hear the subtle rustle of leaves echoing through the Autumn wind.
The first time I met him was two summers ago, over here, on
this secluded grassland...while I was attempting to escape momentarily from the
outside world.
It wasn't just a simple
grassland, it was magical.. my presence here made me feel stronger, much more
awake. The spectrum of colours radiated across the lush dewy grass , gentle smells
of flowers would permeate the air all season...but at the end of the day, it
was the serenity and the peacefulness it gave off that mattered to me.
He was beautiful..he had eyes the colour of hazel; big, warm
and daring. The rays of sunlight would highlight the dimples on his cheek.. and
it would reflect back on me, melting my heart. Love at first sight is pretty
subjective..but the first time I set eyes on him, I finally believed that anyone
could fall victim to it..at any place, at any time.
The day he left me, he was lying on the ground.. lifeless, an
empty shell that was once filled with energy and life. However, there was one
thing, his spirit had yet to leave his body..he was trying to tell me something. He was murdered and I was certain of it. The police refused to
suspect foul play.. because all evidence pointed towards suicide.
This was done intentionally, a piece of work accomplished
from days of meticulous planning.
Somebody wanted me less powerful, vulnerable and dead.
They
hit my soft spot, they brutally took away the only person that could make my
heart skip.
Tomorrow, my energy will be regained and my powers will be
stronger than ever...to all those people that took my most treasured person
away, they will be proved wrong.
Love was never so powerful. I was prepared to sacrifice.
Comment, if you have anything to say. I appreciate feedback!
Love, June
Wow,, that is amazing! Great job! Totally unexpected too. This writing challenge sounds like fun. :)
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DeleteWoah J! You are an amazing writer! That was such an unexpected ending though. Lol I thought he was just a jerk who broke up with her.
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Thank you M!:) Aww yes, that would have been an interesting story, but I had to incorporate a magical power:)
Deleteyou are an incredible writer!! i was so into the story :)
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Thank you Sarahi!<3 Your comment means so much to me:)
DeleteNice :) Who says you're not a good writer! Wasn't expecting that ending; totally caught me off guard! Hope to read a continuation to it in the near future :D
ReplyDeleteAww thank you:) I bet you would have done a much better job at this!<3
DeleteWow! Great chapter! You are an amazing writer. The ending was surprising, but I really liked it. ;) Thank you for entering my writing challenge; it means a lot to me. :)
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I should be the one thanking you for this amazing challenge!!:)
DeleteWonderful chapter! Thank you for visiting my blog. Following you back on GFC. :)
ReplyDeleteYou're so welcome!<3
DeleteThank you for visiting my blog:)
That was really great! Love it. The challenge sounds like tons of fun :)
ReplyDeleteYes it was fun!:D
DeleteThank you so much Maddie for your comment!
Wow, you're a phenomenal writer! I loved reading this, it was like reading a part of a real book!
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Haha you are too sweet<3
DeleteThank you!:D
You are so talented :) You're work is so professional!
ReplyDeleteI loved this story so much, from the first sentence you had grabbed my attention, and I wanted to continue reading!
-Lauren
I should be saying that to you!!!
DeleteI'm so glad you liked it, thank you for making my day Lauren!<3
Wow..thats amazing, talented writer!!!! I have a strong passion for writing too, though I never get around to it.. keep it up! You should so totally write a book!!!
ReplyDeleteI've never actually thought of that, but your comment is so encouraging!:)
DeleteYour writing's on your blog are so beautiful and inspirational. If you do end up writing a story, post it on your blog so I can see it!<3 Thank you Riarna, you are lovely!
Not a good writer? Not true! You had me reading til the end! Great job, this was truly amazing. ;) Can't wait for the next chapter! Do you know when Aliah will post it? I'm exciting to start writing chapter 2 for mine! :) Anyways, awesome job June.
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Haha thank you, you are too nice!:)
DeleteI've read your chapter, it's amazing, tons better than mine!
I'm excited too:) Can't wait for Aliah to post chapter 2 challenges!
You have some extreme talent in the writing department. I mean wow! Just WOW! That is definitely something I could read in a book! Excellent job!
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Thank you so much<3<3<3 but extreme talent is too much an exaggeration! Hahaha:) Your kind words mean so much to me!<3
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DeleteWow, you are talented! I loved every word of it. :-)
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I'm so so glad you liked it!:)
DeleteThank you Katie<3 your comment means so much to me!
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ReplyDeleteOf course not! I'm sure Aliah would love for you to do it!:)
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Thank you so much~!
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Thank you Jola! You are so lovely:)
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Ooh, this was very pretty. I love all your descriptions. That's something that I struggle with myself, so I love to see it well done by other writers. Not a good writer? I'd say you are one.
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DeleteEXCCAAAUUUUUZZZZEEE ME! Did you say you were not good at writing?
ReplyDeleteLies! This was amazing. I loved it...and can't wait for more. Congrats on being a brilliant writer.
Awww, a comment from such an amazing writer means so much to me!:) Thank you♥
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Besos, desde España, Marcela♥
Oooh such gorgeous fashion blog! Yes, of course!:)
DeleteYour blog is amazing! & so is your writing ;)
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Thank you Lauren! I checked out your blog and my gosh... it's fab!<3
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Another great blogger!:) Hahaha! Thank you so much, you don't know how much your comment means to me!<3
DeleteWooooahhh! :D That was AMAZING, June! Your story has a very captivating plot! There's going to be more chapters, right? Please please please, say yes! *__* I love how unashamed this chapter is, it just dives right into the plot without explanation, yet I am already intrigued. Can't wait to read more!! <3
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Thank you so much haha! Yes I will post more if I have the time!:)
DeleteYour support means so much to me<3
Wow, that's beautiful! I can't wait to read more.
ReplyDeleteMaybe I'll do that challenge, too. It kinda looks like fun; I'll have to check it out.
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It was really fun! Do check it out!
DeleteThank you so much, you are such a lovely person!:))
haha, thanks :)) I'll definitely be looking for more story, though!!
DeleteThank you so much for your visit and comment!!!
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Have a wonderful weekend!! and my like in bloglovin for your post too!!!:)))
Besos, Marcela♥
Thank you! I really really appreciate it!<3
DeleteYour writing is amazing! I wished there was more when I reached the end ;)
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I'm more than happy to follow back!:) Thank you so much<3
DeleteWow, that's was such an awesome chapter and what a plot twist at the end! Keep writing beautiful! <3
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Aww.. you are too sweet!:))
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hi dear! i just found your blog and im so glad!! its very unique and so interesting!! it would be really pleasure to follow each other! if you want just let me know about it! this challenge is really amazing! i wish you good luck! hope to hear from you! kisses!
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Thank you so much for your kind words!!:)
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What a lovely piece, June! I found it vivid and descriptive – you have talent (: If you do start on a second chapter, I'd love to read it ♥
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I will if I have the time, you are too nice Emily!<3 Thank you:)
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Hahaha!! I'm so glad you liked it!<3 Your support encourages me so much!!Thank you<3
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Thank you for the tag Bree!<3
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Thank you so much J for your lovely comment!! you are so kind!:) I've just followed you back on gfc! I laso followed you on bloglovin so if youu want follow me back there too!! thanks a lot again! kisses!
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Oh yes I am!:) So sorry, just saw your comment. I'm moving to KL :)
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